tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post116669009450446526..comments2023-11-05T03:12:47.614-08:00Comments on Toonhole: Revisions.katzenjammer studioshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07821361991709824229noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post-79501095718966598732011-02-28T02:20:14.291-08:002011-02-28T02:20:14.291-08:00Here is a recent comic. Mike and John were telling...Here is a recent comic. Mike and John were telling me that it wasn't as clear as it could be.About Health Bloghttp://slpdis5.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post-61088890335964999532011-01-12T04:52:14.672-08:002011-01-12T04:52:14.672-08:00Hi,
I begin on internet with a directoryHi, <br /> <br /> I begin on internet with a directoryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post-1168301129267126542007-01-08T16:05:00.000-08:002007-01-08T16:05:00.000-08:00yeah somehow even with snow n scruff the passage o...yeah somehow even with snow n scruff the passage of time isn't exactly clear. i think it has to do with the pacing of the panels. I'm thinking like one more panel in the middle would help. or maybe the fact that i'm analyzing this is making it hard to feel the joke out. on the other hand, in the old studio system of animated shorts they'd spend weeks tweaking all the gags. maybe they just had a large pool of secretaries to test it on.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post-1168159588596542362007-01-07T00:46:00.000-08:002007-01-07T00:46:00.000-08:00the second one is better!! hilarious!!!the second one is better!! hilarious!!!PEPEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09759927788653950924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23402902.post-1167544067026597652006-12-30T21:47:00.000-08:002006-12-30T21:47:00.000-08:00Yep - the new snow covered version is better. How...Yep - the new snow covered version is better. However, I kinda feel like I'd like to see a drawing of an hour glass or a clock inbetween panels 2 and 3. Maybe squeeze in an extra skinny panel.<BR/><BR/>I guess my thinking is that the reader will see the panel, figure time has passed, then get hit with the joke. Sorta like an "anticipation" to the joke.<BR/><BR/>Maybe you're trying to keep it a 3 panel comic though. And maybe I'm overthinking :)<BR/><BR/>Nice stuff!boobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17679236444068197767noreply@blogger.com